Self-Editing Tips: Giving your readers "feels"—Visual Breaks Part 2

Self-Editing Tips—The Power of Visual Break Case Study

In Part 1, we talked about writing not just so the words create an image in the readers head, but I gave you self-editing tips so that they create a visually pleasing corresponding image on the page.

Literally, with line and scene breaks and deliberately placed blocks of text.

Today, I want to do a sort of case study for this using Nobel Prize Winner for Literature, José Saramago's brilliant but disturbing horror Blindness.